Tuesday, November 27, 2007
What one experience has significantly changed your life for the better?
The one experience that significantly changed my life was the time when I found my dog Buster lying in his cage lifeless. It hurt so bad to see my best friend lying there still and cold because he was just alive and playing with me the night before. I can still remember the tragic morning it was February 10, 2007 around 10:30 am I went outside to feed them I like I usually would do and I sensed that something was different. Buster was about 7 1/2 years old we got him when he was about 6 or 8 months old...
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I know you're probably not done with this posting yet, but I want to make sure you're going in the right direction. The prompt asks for an experience that changed your life for the BETTER. How did Buster's death improve things for you? It seems like such a sad thing.
Let's talk about it tonight,
Adam
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Michanda,
The comments above are accurate, but you can rectify the situation with some simple additions based on my previous comments.
See you tonight,
Adam
Michanda,
You left me hanging with the beginning of this essay! What's the rest of the story, and how does it relate to the essay question?
Still waiting,
Adam
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